Hungry Ghost
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Watch out for that suboxone, hungry ghost, the desire is more righteous-feeling when your depths are cuffed by frozen rocks.

Of course, I'm always on fire, so the ice is simply compacted fecal rocks.

As this is one of those nature poems, you could see about the second line composed of abstraction.

Maybe switch "curiosity" with some animal or thing that's curious.
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Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 03:56 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by rowens - 06-28-2023, 04:17 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 04:33 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by busker - 06-28-2023, 08:01 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 09:55 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by brynmawr1 - 06-28-2023, 10:09 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 09:40 PM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by Kynaston Levitt - 06-29-2023, 06:51 AM



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