06-27-2023, 01:11 AM
(06-26-2023, 12:08 PM)Miley Wrote: horizon how manyAssuming you are presenting us with four different poems, I most enjoy the second one. I have the urge to reformat/rewrite each one, but I'm not sure that would be helpful to you, and besides, it would seem presumptuous to do so.
fingers a tree sprouts
feeling every inch
Throwing the thawed hatchlings out
back a week of worms
dissolve in rain
rain
seed
acorn
branch
tree
men too
fall on asphalt
days like
dark leaves passing
to ochre and violet
soil
Thanks for an interesting read.
TqB

