06-14-2023, 05:54 AM
@Knot - thanks for the crit. I struggled with constructing a poem to live up to the title, tbh, since a cherub and a chimera are quite dissimilar (!), and yet there's a pleasing sound to the pair which makes me loath to put the horse before the cart. How to get to the final strophe remains a challenge. Your feedback helps.
PS - if not chimera, then ephemera? genera? menora? surely there's a homonym somewhere that fits....
@Levitt - thanks for reading. S2 is meant to be read as 'the black sepulchre (of) non-being (is) eternal'. Hope that helps decipher the rest of it, which isn't intended to be anything other than straightforward. 'Sepulchre' is a fairly common word, I'd think - there's the church of one that's supposedly holy.
PS - if not chimera, then ephemera? genera? menora? surely there's a homonym somewhere that fits....
@Levitt - thanks for reading. S2 is meant to be read as 'the black sepulchre (of) non-being (is) eternal'. Hope that helps decipher the rest of it, which isn't intended to be anything other than straightforward. 'Sepulchre' is a fairly common word, I'd think - there's the church of one that's supposedly holy.