Daze of Divinity // End of Daze

Daze of Divinity // End of Daze

Knot

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06-11-2023, 09:48 PM

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Hi Bunx,
just to say I enjoyed the read.
Should you decide to workshop it let me know.

(Very small thing, but 'knell' in verse 5? I want to read it as 'kneel')

Best, Knot

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Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-08-2023, 04:51 AM

RE: End of Daze - by brynmawr1 - 06-08-2023, 11:30 AM

RE: End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-08-2023, 12:16 PM

RE: End of Daze - by Knot - 06-11-2023, 09:48 PM

RE: End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-12-2023, 12:31 AM

RE: End of Daze - by Knot - 06-12-2023, 01:17 AM

RE: End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-12-2023, 02:05 AM

RE: End of Daze - by Knot - 06-13-2023, 01:20 AM

RE: Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-16-2023, 05:34 AM

RE: Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Knot - 06-16-2023, 09:27 PM

RE: Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Bunx - 06-23-2023, 03:25 AM

RE: Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Knot - 06-23-2023, 08:58 PM

RE: Daze of Divinity // End of Daze - by Bunx - 10-21-2023, 03:41 AM

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