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[TranquillityBase]

His love letter lies
on a park bench words bleeding
with every rain drop

alternative version

His love letter lies
on a park bench words bleeding
more with each rain drop

I like posted version best.  I think the title gives away too much, lessening the impact it could have.

 and I know how you feel about titles.

Maybe that's why haiku don't have titles.  You can always use the untitled label.