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Well slicer-

Good short one here- especially 'just wait' at the end. Don't know that 'yeah, and' is needed though- it only slowed me down heading for that punch line. Yeah, and it ain't adding anything for me.

I guess we're all sort of place holders.

Thanks,
Mark
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Lorem Ipsum - by Semicircle - 05-18-2023, 06:41 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Wjames - 05-18-2023, 09:29 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by galaxitchi - 05-19-2023, 02:04 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Mark A Becker - 05-20-2023, 03:38 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Semicircle - 05-20-2023, 12:58 PM



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