05-20-2023, 03:38 AM
Well slicer-
Good short one here- especially 'just wait' at the end. Don't know that 'yeah, and' is needed though- it only slowed me down heading for that punch line. Yeah, and it ain't adding anything for me.
I guess we're all sort of place holders.
Thanks,
Mark
Good short one here- especially 'just wait' at the end. Don't know that 'yeah, and' is needed though- it only slowed me down heading for that punch line. Yeah, and it ain't adding anything for me.
I guess we're all sort of place holders.
Thanks,
Mark

