05-17-2023, 05:05 AM
Hello Motion-
Hunter of Nightwatch I have only changed one word, and deleted a couple
listens with elven ears.
What is lurking in the night
you will hunt with ease.
Strike with your bow, leave
all dead in your wake
a warning to those eavesdropping
on your kill.
Sound buoys along in one’s ear, you are dead this whole part needs to be re-worked
hearing his crunchy footsteps.
Smell the rotting flesh from his enchanting slaughter.
Slaughter in the woods! Slaughter in the woods!
They shout.
Tighten up the ending and you could have an interesting tale.
Mark
Hunter of Nightwatch I have only changed one word, and deleted a couple
listens with elven ears.
What is lurking in the night
you will hunt with ease.
Strike with your bow, leave
all dead in your wake
a warning to those eavesdropping
on your kill.
Sound buoys along in one’s ear, you are dead this whole part needs to be re-worked
hearing his crunchy footsteps.
Smell the rotting flesh from his enchanting slaughter.
Slaughter in the woods! Slaughter in the woods!
They shout.
Tighten up the ending and you could have an interesting tale.
Mark