Talisman(edit)

[TranquillityBase]

 Regarding the ambiguity, I have always found a little ambiguity compelling and I struggle with the balance of also giving the reader something more concrete. I'm not good at making things up so this is an  actual conversation I had with a good friend and it's what was said.  I think what I might do is add more nuance detail of setting and mood.  Try to bring in more poetic elements if I can.  What do you think of the final stanza?
Thanks,
bryn

The ambiguity:  fair enough...that is how people talk, so best to preserve that.

Last stanza worked for me.