05-02-2023, 06:29 AM
I like the idea of a NaPM spotlight thread. Otherwise, too many good ones get buried in there.
I liked WJames in this one. I don't know what S2 was talking about (can only think of spongebob), but the lines in bold were nice. And the final one....transfixed by TV / youtube...:-
Laughing all morning
with a bowl of cinammon toast crunch
in maple leaf pyjamas
on the corduroy couch
you burned a hole in
playing with matches.
The tv is playing songs
on a mayonnaise trumpet
in a woman's bathing suit
at the bottom of the ocean,
and I am transfixed.
I liked WJames in this one. I don't know what S2 was talking about (can only think of spongebob), but the lines in bold were nice. And the final one....transfixed by TV / youtube...:-
Laughing all morning
with a bowl of cinammon toast crunch
in maple leaf pyjamas
on the corduroy couch
you burned a hole in
playing with matches.
The tv is playing songs
on a mayonnaise trumpet
in a woman's bathing suit
at the bottom of the ocean,
and I am transfixed.