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05-01-2023, 04:44 AM

(05-01-2023, 03:45 AM)Wjames Wrote: This is nice - one knit is I would remove the second 'orange' in the final line, we know the tint is orange from the first mention of the colour.

Good nit to pick, updated accordingly Thumbsup

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Orphan - by TranquillityBase - 04-30-2023, 02:10 AM

RE: Orphan - by Wjames - 05-01-2023, 03:45 AM

RE: Orphan - by TranquillityBase - 05-01-2023, 04:44 AM

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