04-26-2023, 03:44 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-26-2023, 04:02 AM by TranquillityBase.)
(04-25-2023, 02:35 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: I did not say muchHey Mark, this is a real heart breaker of a poem. So spare but so poignant.
I did not say much
the last time
that I would see you,
in Florida.
We stood quietly
then, on the shore
of the Gulf, and watched
the sun set.
But I want you to know
Dad, that I do visit
from time to time
now,
to talk,
to the wind.
I skimmed through most of NaPM, re-reading a lot, in trying to think about whose poem or work to address. I just want to say it's pretty effing impressive to be with you folks, with special kudos for some I haven't encountered before (as much) like WJ James and Quix. Though there've been times I wanted to give up, it's a charge to be in your company. I could have written about any of a dozen more that have shown up in our group.
Anyway, big squeal from a little pig.

