2023 NaPM 19 April
#2
(Out The Car Window While Driving)

The road ahead was encased in a cocoon
of soft yellow light. It looked magical
like it should lead to a pot of gold,
or a quest, or a portal to another world. 
It was the hero’s road at the story’s end,
or a lover’s lane at the end of the movie
(once they’ve worked out all their misunderstandings).

But all I could think about in that moment
was that the sunset was a metaphor. 
Not any specific metaphor, just an empty metaphor
waiting to be applied in some other scenario.
I felt like I was caught inside this sunset-metaphor
by accident, or as a side character or onlooker. 
It wasn’t my sunset. 
Like being the guest at a wedding, 
I can observe, but it isn’t mine.
I don’t know whose hero-road that was
or where that metaphor was headed.

It was a strange feeling
to appreciate the sunset in all its glory,
and then set it aside into a file
labeled ‘stock footage of a metaphor.’
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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2023 NaPM 19 April - by RiverNotch - 04-18-2023, 11:32 PM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by Quixilated - 04-19-2023, 03:39 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by TranquillityBase - 04-19-2023, 06:26 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-19-2023, 08:18 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by dukealien - 04-20-2023, 05:04 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by CRNDLSM - 04-20-2023, 06:06 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by Wjames - 04-20-2023, 08:20 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 19 April - by RiverNotch - 04-21-2023, 10:30 AM



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