Kiss, Kiss Bang, Bang

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A drum in your blood, hand touches,
the darkness of her nipples—     my only suggestion is to replace "darkness" with another word; darkness seems too vague; something tactile perhaps

hair that winds your wrists; she wants you
to run with her

through wet night leaves,
and you go

This is a very evocative poem, erotic and beautiful.  For me, nothing needs changing except "darkness of her nipples".  

I like the way it leaves the reader hanging at the end.