Culture of Nostalgia

[71degrees]

I would consider cutting the extraneous words (e.g. that, would x 2) to tighten things up. Keep things in one tense.

I like the stanza break / line break but would move 'for' to the first line of S2.

This is a nice, nostalgic piece that doesn't need the term in the title. Let the reader decide on the mood. Maybe leave the title as just 'Culture'...