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03-29-2023, 04:16 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-29-2023, 04:18 AM by Tiger the Lion.)
(03-29-2023, 03:43 AM)Semicircle Wrote: I prefer Brynmawr's interpretation, it is more immediate.Ya, I agree. But really liked the sonics of echoing cave rock. Edit: also, less is not always more. There are times when an intended haiku gets too big for its boots. Worth toying with this into 6-8 lines. |
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Haste - by Semicircle - 03-28-2023, 03:51 AM
RE: Haste - by Tiger the Lion - 03-28-2023, 04:21 AM
RE: Haste - by Semicircle - 03-28-2023, 10:47 AM
RE: Haste - by Tiger the Lion - 03-28-2023, 12:09 PM
RE: Haste - by Semicircle - 03-29-2023, 03:43 AM
RE: Haste - by Tiger the Lion - 03-29-2023, 04:16 AM
RE: Haste--Hiccup - by Semicircle - 03-29-2023, 06:19 AM
RE: Haste--Hiccup - by Mark A Becker - 04-02-2023, 02:31 AM
RE: Haste--Hiccup - by Semicircle - 04-03-2023, 02:55 AM
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