02-23-2023, 11:27 PM
Hi Tim-
Since this is MISC, I'll just point out some phrases that stood out for me, without suggesting changes.
I poke around
old wounds,
feeling them out with a mind
with too many loose wires.
Take the dog to the park
sit with a hung jury of old menĀ
time that makes a shadow
where my mind is still.
Interesting title, too. Thanks for this one,
Mark
Since this is MISC, I'll just point out some phrases that stood out for me, without suggesting changes.
I poke around
old wounds,
feeling them out with a mind
with too many loose wires.
Take the dog to the park
sit with a hung jury of old menĀ
time that makes a shadow
where my mind is still.
Interesting title, too. Thanks for this one,
Mark

