Catechism

[busker]

I like all three versions. I think the first and the latest are two separate poems. They can stand on their own.
The ‘question no one can answer’ in the original is beautiful. It’ñ design belong in the current version, being less conversational thsn the original, but it IS a loss.
S2 L3: why not end the line at ‘April.?


There’s something about the raw impact of the original