02-02-2023, 04:24 AM
Anytime a person works on a poem, it's time well spent.
PDQ response: Everyone already knows that April = spring so to me those two uses are wasted. Now that being said, everyone also knows April is the cruelest of months. So...maybe that makes up for its one usage. But not twice. Actually, thrice if one counts Spring as another usage.
I like both revisions b/c of my first sentence. After all, it's your poem and you must take ownership at some point.
PDQ response: Everyone already knows that April = spring so to me those two uses are wasted. Now that being said, everyone also knows April is the cruelest of months. So...maybe that makes up for its one usage. But not twice. Actually, thrice if one counts Spring as another usage.
I like both revisions b/c of my first sentence. After all, it's your poem and you must take ownership at some point.