01-31-2023, 11:17 PM
Thanks Mark, Bryn & 71,
I've done an edit. It may seem like I ignored your prescriptions, but they all helped me to see what I wanted to make essential in the poem.
TqB
I've done an edit. It may seem like I ignored your prescriptions, but they all helped me to see what I wanted to make essential in the poem.
TqB

