01-30-2023, 01:03 PM
(01-29-2023, 10:55 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: CatechismHey Tim,
April is coming,
I can feel it in the rain.
Is three years long enough
to abstract the grief?
“John is gone” said my daughter
“Gone where?” was my startled response.
Even now it’s a question
no one can answer.
There was a time when you lived
and now a time after.
April will come
I can feel it in the rain.
Great piece. I read it as couplets so that's how I arranged it and made some other word changes. Admittedly, S3 doesn't work as well. Glean what you can from my suggestions.
Take care,
steve

