A few lines

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I started this a couple of days ago and have no ambition to keep it going. So I figured this is a good one to post for critiques.



and the moons shine
and the suns rise
and the stars go and rest           I think the stars should do something more active....burn?
as the wines thrive
we stay alive and drink
down to an empty chalice        "chalice" seems to fancy to me; goblet, cup?  I like "cup" best as it maintains the single syllable pattern of all the previous lines.

I think it's a pretty complete poem as is.  Doesn't feel like a fragment.