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thnx Addy, ur comments are good.
(05-22-2010, 08:16 AM)addy Wrote: I loved this 
, The images were spot-on, as the mood it set. My only contention is the third stanza... I guess the mention of blood jerked me out of the general tone of the poem, even though I'm sure that's not how you meant it. Anyway, nice job with this one
