Cattails Greening

[Bianca Alabaster]

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Thanks for ur comments, yes that stanza is my favorite as well.
and even though that last line could be better I'm big on that small word
BE
thanks

yes that's the way to post a new poem Mimi.

i'm glad this is in mild crit
because i can't as such see anything wrong in it.

not sure the last three lines work for me, they feel a little forced.

the picture you paint feels real and rustic.
loved the 1st stanza. it was a good way to lead us into the poem
and the 2nd warmed us up to the rest.

not sure why but i i found these three lines to be the essence of what i think is a great read..

The Cattails greening
has brought you up
from under the bog.