01-14-2023, 01:29 PM
(01-13-2023, 08:58 AM)dukealien Wrote: UnintuitiveHi Duke,
Tomatoes left out
in a sunny room
stay bright and flavorful
while those refrigerated
lose their sweetness
rot and shrink away.
Just so with Man:
remaining fresh
demands not coolness
but incessant ripening.
I agree with Busker and maybe you could do away entirely with S2 L1 or something broader, such as "As we age:". Glad you are feeling better.
Take care,
steve

