05-22-2010, 08:16 AM
I loved this 
, The images were spot-on, as the mood it set. My only contention is the third stanza... I guess the mention of blood jerked me out of the general tone of the poem, even though I'm sure that's not how you meant it. Anyway, nice job with this one
, The images were spot-on, as the mood it set. My only contention is the third stanza... I guess the mention of blood jerked me out of the general tone of the poem, even though I'm sure that's not how you meant it. Anyway, nice job with this one
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?