Meat Grinder ~ adult content

[addy]

Yep, it's definitely original. Just imo though, I think you can shorten this, or as billy suggested add a few more images. Because to me its just one image that you stretched out too much over the entirety of the poem, so by the last few verses it was already starting to lose its impact and just becoming a bit obvious. Again just imo, but its still a very competently written, gutsy poem