12-31-2022, 10:57 AM
(12-18-2022, 10:11 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:fluidity and structure, I like this a lot. the banality of the lower lines (you are amazing / you are unique / you can do anything) strike me as a little tongue in cheek, along with 'farewell to fascism / and dream, come true' which I also like. I get the sense of threads knotting together as I read down, a reaffirmation indeed.Reaffirmation
Endless streams coloring the memory
of fears and desires thicker, heavier. catch
loose ends tangling and collapse. although
weaving, unravelling always disorganized
deafening weight from what you believe
of familial pressure you yearn the righteous
and the roles laid lessons to lead, run
down by ancestors away with your needs
you are the earths farewell to fascism
eruption to freedom and dream, come true
you are the births complete personification
corruption, mutation be the change you seek
you are amazing you can do anything
you are unique you can make mistakes
you can be alone but you know you shouldn't you shouldn't have done that.

