05-22-2010, 07:54 AM
for some reason it made me smile
but i'm not sure if that was the intent.
if you don't mind me saying, when i comment on angst
poetry i always say make it different, original
this is certainly that.
an image in place of one of the tells
for me would enhance the poem to be even better.
thanks for the poem Bianca.
well worth the read
but i'm not sure if that was the intent.
if you don't mind me saying, when i comment on angst
poetry i always say make it different, original
this is certainly that.
an image in place of one of the tells
for me would enhance the poem to be even better.
thanks for the poem Bianca.
well worth the read
