Heat

[billy]

needs a tiny bit of grammar but other than that, it's a delicious little piece of prose (jmo) personally i think good prose if intended can be as good as poetry.


i thought the last verse was poignant and extremely good.
i think it could be a poem on all on it's own.

thanks for taking the time to post sharon.

in all seriousness, please don't join the sewer, it's really not a nice place to visit. i hope to see more of your poetry

thanks again.