12-22-2022, 03:44 AM
(12-22-2022, 03:09 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:I made the revision.(12-22-2022, 02:42 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Thanks Tim- I lost my youngest brother very recently, and it should've been his birthday last week. That's how this one came to mind... It's a kinda, sorta Christmas poem. I should've written this as "closer than MY tears" or "OUR tears" instead of "YOUR" tears, since he no longer has tears, but I/we still do.I did wonder about the owner of those tears, so that would be a good change.

