12-18-2022, 10:52 PM
(12-18-2022, 10:11 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:I enjoy all the different ways this can be read. My first reaction was I found the last line a let down. Or maybe it should be moved to below the two columns as a centered line holding them upReaffirmation
Endless streams coloring the memory
of fears and desires thicker, heavier. catch
loose ends tangling and collapse. although
weaving, unravelling always disorganized
deafening weight from what you believe
of familial pressure you yearn the righteous
and the roles laid lessons to lead, run
down by ancestors away with your needs
you are the earths farewell to fascism
eruption to freedom and dream, come true
you are the births complete personification
corruption, mutation be the change you seek
you are amazing you can do anything
you are unique you can make mistakes these lines are the weakest....too inspirationally common
you can be alone but you know you shouldn't you shouldn't have done that.
"You shouldn't have done that."
Just a thought.

