They crawled deep

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I think when we finish, we should send them to the anthropologist who made the discovery.

Hey Tim-
I think I’ll name my version “Rising Star” as a nod to that discovery in South Africa. That title seems apropos for the subject.
Yes, my ending is about a 180 from yours: yours a declarative statement, mine a question (to abruptly bring the reader into the scene).  Yours ends in their present, mine in ours.
Don’t know if Berger is even the right person to send these poems to, but I’m game.
Mark

I'm curious to do it; but I may read more about him first, if I can.  I think of it as a novel form of fan mail that even a poetry atheist might enjoy.