12-12-2022, 10:15 PM
Hey slicer-
The difficulty of 'timing' the rise and fall of crypto seems to be driving this piece.
Loopholes weaved good start
around the process of greed greed is an 'intense and selfish desire for something', and not really a process
gradually perfected.
A web work so subtle maybe 'a dark web'
any rebuttal not the right word choice
was dissected. going for the rhyme is throwing you (and me) off
Never a venture more costly
than the prevention of money perhaps 'replacement' vs 'prevention'
and it seems now
you've become greedy. This ending needs work- a way to express that feeling of 'easy come - easy go'.
Cool idea slicer. I'd suggest a bit of crypto research to help flesh this one out.
Mark
The difficulty of 'timing' the rise and fall of crypto seems to be driving this piece.
Loopholes weaved good start
around the process of greed greed is an 'intense and selfish desire for something', and not really a process
gradually perfected.
A web work so subtle maybe 'a dark web'
any rebuttal not the right word choice
was dissected. going for the rhyme is throwing you (and me) off
Never a venture more costly
than the prevention of money perhaps 'replacement' vs 'prevention'
and it seems now
you've become greedy. This ending needs work- a way to express that feeling of 'easy come - easy go'.
Cool idea slicer. I'd suggest a bit of crypto research to help flesh this one out.
Mark