Homo naledi
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I wonder why this is in 'Basic'. The poem itself is anything but.
'This poem is a great example of showing, not telling.
The following are particularly evocative:

'original dark'
'predators....listen at the entrance'
'shadows.....cave walls'
'prehensile laughter'

the last two lines are extraordinary
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Homo naledi - by TranquillityBase - 12-10-2022, 11:19 PM
RE: Homo naledi - by busker - 12-11-2022, 02:11 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by TranquillityBase - 12-13-2022, 05:22 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by brynmawr1 - 12-11-2022, 01:49 PM
RE: Homo naledi - by Mark A Becker - 12-12-2022, 05:33 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by TranquillityBase - 12-15-2022, 10:42 PM
RE: Homo naledi - by alonso ramoran - 12-25-2022, 05:25 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by TranquillityBase - 12-25-2022, 05:57 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by busker - 12-25-2022, 06:52 AM
RE: Homo naledi - by TranquillityBase - 12-25-2022, 10:55 PM



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