11-06-2022, 11:56 AM
(11-05-2022, 06:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Words are ain’t worth their weight in dirtHi slicer-
Action is worth its weight in words (but words are weightless- maybe “worth its weight in work”)
Keep shoveling up the earth
Show your money's worth
The first two lines ate pretty good, but the last two are a bit of a let down.
Not sure what to suggest, but I think going for the rhyme doesn’t help.
Mark

