10-19-2022, 10:38 AM
are you angry or only serious?
You've got a lot of great feedback on this already, especially in terms of making it more succinct/direct... the ending is the poignant part, for me anyway. If I look at the poem through a critical lens, I guess I wonder if the details included are the right details, is it the beard? the Olympus? It is effectual as is though. Thanks for sharing
You've got a lot of great feedback on this already, especially in terms of making it more succinct/direct... the ending is the poignant part, for me anyway. If I look at the poem through a critical lens, I guess I wonder if the details included are the right details, is it the beard? the Olympus? It is effectual as is though. Thanks for sharing