Night sky:
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beautifully putĀ  like its arrangement it kind of flows gives alot of hope for us however these are well known things
you could have added some original metaphors like the sun and stars in my lovers eyes or stars like grains of sand
in the vast ocean sky
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Night sky: - by billy - 10-22-2011, 06:36 PM
RE: Night sky: - by Wildcard - 10-23-2011, 12:01 AM
RE: Night sky: - by billy - 10-24-2011, 11:09 AM
RE: Night sky: - by addy - 10-24-2011, 12:30 PM
RE: Night sky: - by billy - 10-25-2011, 11:55 AM
RE: Night sky: - by addy - 10-28-2011, 03:52 PM
RE: Night sky: - by billy - 10-30-2011, 12:30 PM
RE: Night sky: - by Ca ne fait rien - 11-04-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Night sky: - by billy - 11-06-2011, 07:51 AM
RE: Night sky: - by EAGLES 28 - 10-19-2022, 02:01 AM



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