10-18-2022, 06:44 AM
(10-18-2022, 06:10 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: I keep coming back to this because I love it so much. This is a very strong edit, IMO. I have a few thoughts if you're still tweaking this one, but I'm hesitant to impose myself further on it. It's hard to say. Sometimes we have to draw a line under it so as not to lose the inspired voice.I'd be interested to hear your suggestions.

