Karma's a Bitch
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(10-15-2022, 06:23 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  
(10-15-2022, 06:15 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  The bullied bully cries
     foul;
playing both sides
of a two-headed coin.

Tiny hands reaching for sympathy.
HA. Well done. 

The space between cries and fowl, makes the bully seem vulnerable. 

I think the bully should flip the coin instead, to show his opposite head. They're vulnerable now.
Thanks Sc.  Was making that edit when I saw your suggestion.
bryn
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Messages In This Thread
Karma's a Bitch - by brynmawr1 - 10-15-2022, 06:15 AM
RE: Karma's a Bitch - by Semicircle - 10-15-2022, 06:23 AM
RE: Karma's a Bitch - by brynmawr1 - 10-15-2022, 06:41 AM
RE: For whom the bell tolls - by rowens - 10-15-2022, 07:58 AM
RE: For whom the bell tolls - by brynmawr1 - 10-15-2022, 08:00 AM
RE: For whom the bell tolls - by rowens - 10-15-2022, 08:26 AM
RE: For whom the bell tolls - by brynmawr1 - 10-15-2022, 10:30 AM
RE: For whom the bell tolls - by rowens - 10-15-2022, 11:49 AM



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