Mijo (edit 3)
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(10-01-2022, 05:22 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  I stare at a half-dark picture of you

you took it yourself
with that the old Olympus film camera

you have a beard
you’re not smiling

I try to read your face,
you look almost angry. I think a direct address would be strong here... 

I'm trying to read your face;
are you angry?

When I look into your eyes
I and pretend you can see me too.
Just my first thoughts. The term Mijo sold it for me before even my first read. 
Paul
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Mijo (edit 3) - by TranquillityBase - 10-01-2022, 05:22 AM
RE: Mijo - by Tiger the Lion - 10-01-2022, 10:54 AM
RE: Mijo - by TranquillityBase - 10-01-2022, 09:28 PM
RE: Mijo - by TranquillityBase - 10-02-2022, 09:20 PM
RE: Mijo - by brynmawr1 - 10-03-2022, 09:06 AM
RE: Mijo - by TranquillityBase - 10-03-2022, 09:53 PM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by Tiger the Lion - 10-18-2022, 06:10 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by TranquillityBase - 10-18-2022, 06:44 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by Tiger the Lion - 10-18-2022, 07:18 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by TranquillityBase - 10-18-2022, 10:17 PM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by rowens - 10-19-2022, 02:11 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 2) - by TranquillityBase - 10-19-2022, 09:11 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 3) - by rowens - 10-19-2022, 09:51 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 3) - by Miley - 10-19-2022, 10:38 AM
RE: Mijo (edit 3) - by TranquillityBase - 10-19-2022, 09:48 PM



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