Love Hurts(edit)

[Mark A Becker]

Hi Steve
Some in-line suggestions. Changed only with a green "r", and subtracted a couple words:

Your voice and body, wanting.
I reach, willing, and offering

at finger distance, watching.
We’ve had this conversation before.

Eye contact.  Not sure
what changed.  Now you allow

touch, places caressed; body
humming.

The thrill of loving, not knowing
when sharp things might come.