Love Hurts(edit)

Love Hurts(edit)

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09-21-2022, 09:16 AM

(09-21-2022, 09:08 AM)ZHamilton Wrote: The push and pull of the dynamic between the two is well constructed. One suggestion: I got hung up on the last stanza a bit with the two uses of know/knowing. Maybe “I remember” or “I surrender to…” Enjoyed the read. Cheers!

Yes, good catch. Thanks
bryn

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Love Hurts(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 09-21-2022, 07:46 AM

RE: Love Hurts - by ZHamilton - 09-21-2022, 09:08 AM

RE: Love Hurts - by brynmawr1 - 09-21-2022, 09:16 AM

RE: Love Hurts - by TranquillityBase - 09-22-2022, 05:37 AM

RE: Love Hurts - by brynmawr1 - 09-22-2022, 11:31 AM

RE: Love Hurts - by Mark A Becker - 09-22-2022, 06:08 AM

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