09-15-2022, 05:23 PM
(09-14-2022, 10:21 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: I’m back from the mountainsEach of those words are like a hammer blow.
with a toothache.
leftover father.
You will always be part of me
my words to you
are a loophole
even death cannot close.
This is one of those poems that editing will ruin and should be left as it is, quite perfect.

