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(09-14-2022, 10:21 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  I’m back from the mountains
with a toothache.

 leftover father.

You will always be part of me

my words to you
are a loophole 
even death cannot close.
Each of those words are like a hammer blow. 
This is one of those poems that editing will ruin and should be left as it is, quite perfect.
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Address Unknown - by TranquillityBase - 09-14-2022, 10:21 PM
RE: Address Unknown - by Mark A Becker - 09-14-2022, 11:31 PM
RE: Address Unknown - by TranquillityBase - 09-15-2022, 09:52 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by busker - 09-15-2022, 05:23 PM
RE: Address Unknown - by Mark A Becker - 09-16-2022, 02:47 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by TranquillityBase - 09-16-2022, 05:47 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by Tiger the Lion - 09-16-2022, 05:51 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by Mark A Becker - 09-16-2022, 06:21 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by TranquillityBase - 09-16-2022, 08:51 AM
RE: Address Unknown - by TranquillityBase - 09-17-2022, 09:37 AM



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