Haunted (Retro)
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It's a sestina where I repeat the first words, I might need to change string to noose so that the boyfriend hangs himself. The last three lines are the worst, most difficult, I was trying to make the neighbor drink a poison under the haunted house's influence, might need to pick a different end rhyme or maybe I can just add three more lines. Thank you so much for the help
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Haunted (Retro) - by CRNDLSM - 09-10-2022, 10:12 AM
RE: Haunted (Retro) - by TranquillityBase - 09-12-2022, 07:47 AM
RE: Haunted (Retro) - by CRNDLSM - 09-12-2022, 11:00 AM



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