Night of yellow moon
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(09-10-2022, 03:30 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  Entrenched pine 
Swaying limbs
Road drips into
Yellow moon           my favorite lines


Shadows weave like
Bloody needles            why bloody?
Forest filled with
Chittering beetles


Simple line           not sure what this line refers to
Numb silence
I hope you
arrive soon.
Other than the lines I've noted, an effective mood piece.
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Night of yellow moon - by Semicircle - 09-10-2022, 03:30 AM
RE: Night of yellow moon - by TranquillityBase - 09-11-2022, 10:04 AM
RE: Night of yellow moon - by Xlateralus - 09-11-2022, 12:51 PM
RE: Night of yellow moon - by Semicircle - 09-12-2022, 06:28 AM



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