09-09-2022, 10:53 PM
(09-07-2022, 12:40 PM)Semicircle Wrote: Thunder ripped cloudsHey SC. Sorry for the brief comment. Just one thing that jumped out at me. I also mostly agree with the lightning consideration.
rain pouring down
valleys sterilized in blue
spades uproot soil "uproot" is the wrong word here. Maybe "upturn" or something
the body won't spoil
flame coursing through
tomorrow morning
the air smelt of you.