09-08-2022, 07:23 AM
'Be my baby' sounds like an Beatles era lyric
(09-06-2022, 08:57 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: Baby has no doubtsWith as many rhymes as there are and deliberate repetitions, I almost wish this was a more structured piece, I dare say it could be turned into a song
shouts down satellites
making my love an interruption be my baby who makes me feel like I'm interupting her life?
a flaking conjunction,
licks the gunpowder off my hands but you're holding the gun
never turns around
except to signal goodnight.
Baby has more to say
than a splintering bomb on a holy day
cutting the wires of salvation
letting me fall one finger at a time I can't figure out why fingers, does this relate back to the trigger to bring the gunpowder?
lifting up my sacred dementia
tossing it in a roadside bin.
Baby is coming in my direction
on a live end street 'live' or 'live'?
leading to a refused desert
where saints wander barking
at moons of distraction. Are the moons the distraction? Or is this like a sub level, moons of moons?
Baby’s got no knees if you please. Two babies here, is this from 'visions of Johanna's?
Baby has to play “no way”
for the jackals of pleasure
in time to the music of nursery requiems
reducing the fusion
to absolute confusion.
Baby’s hum across the bent nickel sky
knows the journey two baby's here again hmm
a contorted trickle half-way to Heaven.
Baby makes my puppet move
as smooth as baby wants it to.
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

