Day of orange sun

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Thunder ripped clouds         One of my favorite lines, although "lightning" might be more appropriate?
rain pouring down
valleys sterilized in blue   also like this line

spades uproot soil
the body won't spoil
flame coursing through       not sure what to think here.  The sun coming out?  Tries to bury the body, forest fire prevents them.

tomorrow morning
the air smelt of you.          feels like a tense conflict between these last two lines.  Intentional?   Guilt afterward- attributes the smell of smoke to their friend burning.

Hi Sc,

Nice imagery.  Just a few comments.
Thanks,
bryn

Forest fires cause orange suns throughout the afternoon because of the smoke in the sky.