09-08-2022, 01:48 AM
(09-06-2022, 10:24 AM)busker Wrote: My friend, your faceThis poem is beautiful and brightened my day a little.
My friend, your face
grows dearer the farther
you go away from me. drift
Awash in the sea at
are all our days
together
for futurity, I agree with Johnin, futurity seems overkill
yet the thought of your eyes
fills me with gladness,
and the garden of youth
still grows memories
of the things that you were,
whatever you be.
Some small suggestions above, otherwize, good piece.
Cheers for the read,
SC

