Here comes CABANABA!!!!! (Edit)

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Cabanaba
might nab ya out I would put 'out' on the next line
the door, window, and I would switch 'window' and 'screen'
or screen.



So common–
when you blink
or think: Cabanaba I really like this punctuation leading to the next block of words down there



Don't worry  
when Cabanaba nabs ya–
it’ll be in a hurry. I don't quite understand why it's in a hurry, maybe you can expand on this with more explanations as to why I shouldn't worry?

Thanks for the critique and encouragement! I have revised.

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Cabanaba is supposed to be somewhat of a vague but menacing creature, so I'm trying to be as open to interpretation as I can with him. There is an underlying metaphor intended.